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lobonz · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 12:35 am Oggetto: they...

...and when are in our sixties, we'll hold hands in the park..we'll talk...we'll know happiness and all the bad times will have disappeared because the strength of our love will have carried us through...

kaykan · non più registrato Iscritto: 22 Lug 2005 Messaggi: 2096

Commenti? è bellissima.

Lord Miklaus · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 7:27 am Oggetto:

Bellissima.

chicco274 · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 8:32 am Oggetto:

ocio · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 8:35 am Oggetto:

Beautiful frame. Delicate image, very good soft B&W.
Compliments Wink

Ciao
Carlo

Derby · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 10:48 am Oggetto:

Welcome lobonz Smile

Really nice shoot, it seems to talk about the long way to do, the future life of these children.
The black border is a strange frame, as the border stops in the water... Surprised

I cannot understand if it's real or not Wink

cosimo cortese · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 2:22 pm Oggetto:

what a beautifull picture lobonz, my compliments! Smile

Just a pair of personal notes (just my pov), hope you like them..
maybe more upper space (more sky) and less lower (less sea) could give the photo a sensation of wider horizon.. how can I say.. more space to the future?

You show us also an interesting postwork job.. first time I see this kind of frame, really original, but I think you can improve it.
After the first look you can see a little perspective incongruence, just where water touch legs. Seems like two different inclination planes: water before boys and water further boys.
Trying to say in a different way: the picture was shooted with a tele, but the first plane looks like a wide lens shooting attachment.
Try to progressively out of focus this area, simulating the same tele dept of field.

oh.. welcome to photo4u.it! Wink

lobonz · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 9:15 pm Oggetto:

lobonz · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 9:18 pm Oggetto:

FotoFaz · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 10:17 pm Oggetto:

Hello lobo! and welcome in our out-of-brain comunity! Very Happy

I like your pic very much. It gives a very important message, and it does in a simple way (the best way to be immediately understood).

I think however, that it is not in correct section of the forum.
This beautifull portrait would be more appreciated in the section "Ritratto" (that means portrait), or also in the "Artwork" section in which we usually put the photos that has had some post-porduction (except from standard fine tuning such as contrast, brightness, white balance, and something like that).

I'd suggetst you also to present yourself in our "new entry" section (in italian is "Per i nuovi utenti" and you can find it following this link http://www.photo4u.it/viewforum.php?f=71 ).
You will find lots of people that will welcome you! Smile

Be ready for the lots of questions that our users will ask you! Very Happy

Bye!

lobonz · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 10:34 pm Oggetto:

melarossa · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 10:59 pm Oggetto:

hi lobonz welcome to p4u Wink

hope you'll enjoy to stay with us Ops

very good shot Ops

surely it can be viewed better in an other section ... I move it in the right place... ritratti (portraits) as FotoFaz says Wink

lobonz · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 11:25 pm Oggetto:

cricro76 · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 11:44 pm Oggetto:

Hi Lobonz!

It's great to see that Photo4U is becoming an international place to discuss about our passion! Smile

Welcome between us! Ok!

lobonz · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 11:48 pm Oggetto:

cricro76 · Inviato: Mer 08 Feb, 2006 11:48 pm Oggetto:

Daniele Carotenuto · utente attivo Iscritto: 22 Dic 2003 Messaggi: 8396

the flood effect is well done but the perspective a bit aprossimatively.. and you should blur it a little cause of the F you used, childrens have to be the only thing in focus

anyways I like it... have you tried off centering the subject? and what about colors?

EOSman · Inviato: Gio 09 Feb, 2006 6:36 pm Oggetto:

Well done lobonz...this image is simply wonderful. I love the soft tone of your BW...and the children are looking to the future...I hope not so far.

Have a nice day.

Felix.
Wink