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| they... di lobonz commento di cosimo cortese |
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what a beautifull picture lobonz, my compliments! 
Just a pair of personal notes (just my pov), hope you like them..
maybe more upper space (more sky) and less lower (less sea) could give the photo a sensation of wider horizon.. how can I say.. more space to the future?
You show us also an interesting postwork job.. first time I see this kind of frame, really original, but I think you can improve it.
After the first look you can see a little perspective incongruence, just where water touch legs. Seems like two different inclination planes: water before boys and water further boys.
Trying to say in a different way: the picture was shooted with a tele, but the first plane looks like a wide lens shooting attachment.
Try to progressively out of focus this area, simulating the same tele dept of field.
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| laura...#2 di lobonz commento di Corto |
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A very dreaming image, nice b/w, the flou effect is very appropriate in this case.
One small thing: i would have cut the top as far as the head of your child |
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| Kahu di lobonz commento di Diego |
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Prima di tutto benvenuto!
Fondamentalmente la foto mi piace per il taglio stretto e la sua espressione, mentre concordo con ocio per il taglio 3:4 verticale. Inoltre trovo troppa maschera di contrasto e non mi piace la desaturazione 
naturally imho
P.S.
..ma sei straniero? Capisci i commenti scritti in italiano? 
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| Kahu di lobonz commento di diegoa |
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| Molto intensa questa espressione, bella la composizione |
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| they... di lobonz commento di Derby |
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Welcome lobonz
Really nice shoot, it seems to talk about the long way to do, the future life of these children.
The black border is a strange frame, as the border stops in the water...  I cannot understand if it's real or not
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| they... di lobonz commento di ocio |
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Beautiful frame. Delicate image, very good soft B&W.
Compliments
Ciao
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| Kahu di lobonz commento di ocio |
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WELCOME lobonz 
Very emotional. Optimal expression. I like this B&W, very good.
I would prefer a vertical image 3:2 format.
Ciao
Carlo |
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| laura... di lobonz commento di ocio |
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why in nature? Beautiful portrait. Good expression child.
I think image is soft sharp, high contrast.
Ciao
Carlo |
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| they... di lobonz commento di lobonz |
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| ...and when are in our sixties, we'll hold hands in the park..we'll talk...we'll know happiness and all the bad times will have disappeared because the strength of our love will have carried us through... |
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